Fearless, Fast-paced Fiction: Suz deMello/Sue Swift











{April 5, 2012}   ***I’m taking the Lucky 7 Challenge!***

This is the Lucky 7 challenge according to author Julia Kavan:

Go to page 7 or 77 in your current manuscript
Go to line 7
Post on your blog the next 7 lines, or sentences, as they are – no cheating
Tag 7 other authors to do the same

Now, I don’t know why this is supposed to be lucky–the instructions didn’t come with those internet promises/threats like, “If you edo this in the next 7 minutes, a leprechaun will show up at your door with the proverbial pot of gold, but if you don’t, your hair will fall out, your face will sprout pustules and you’ll never get laid again.” But here goes:

***

When she’d seen the cave first, it had been strewn with garbage, old clothing, sea-wrack and the like. Now it was strewn with bodies.

Scattered bits—heads, arms and so forth—were tossed willy-nilly. Blood oozed, its stench mingling with the miasma of rotting seaweed. Bile rose in her throat and her body convulsed.

Dugald sprinted for the cave’s mouth. She heard the splash of water beneath his boots, heard the crash of waves. Turning her head away from him, she gulped in a deep breath of fresher air. Her muscles loosened as her body relaxed.

***

So what you think? Would you read this book? That’s the real question, hmm?

 

 

 



[...] fantasy, fiction, genre fiction, Novel, Writing at 1:44 PM by Josh Lemay I found this on another site and it looked fun, so I figured I’d try it [...]



I tried this out and posted the results on my site. This is a really neat idea, though.

I’m afraid your excerpt is far more exciting than mine, but I think mine’s alright =P

Thanks for sharing this! It’s fun.



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